Nice start to your site. Need a little more work in order to get full points for this geographic section. Need to add information on all 5 regions, and add more details to physical features page. You also should have pics for each topic of geography.
SCORE 80%
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Jett Wallace
8/30/2014 11:55:28 am
Thank you for your feedback. Is there any way I can add more information and get a higher grade.
Jett
32a- Need a little more info and pics for each topic
32b- No info / pic for Spanish Missions or de Soto
32c- Need separate information/ pics about SP/FR/BR
SCORE- 70
Fix these things so I can give you a higher score.
Go to http://cargillstudiosite.weebly.com/ for ideas.
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Mr. Cargill
9/29/2014 03:10:09 am
33 A- Missing information and images
33 B-NTI
33 C-NTI
Score 0
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Mr. Cargill
9/29/2014 03:12:53 am
33 A-Missing information and images
33 B-Found! Missing info and images though
33 C-Found! Missing images and info though
Disregard previous blog post!
Score 50
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JCARGILL
12/15/2014 11:41:08 am
Western Expansion Project-
Missing the 3 Rs on your proposal.
As I go back and look at previous comments there is a reoccurring theme to your website: Missing or little info/pics. NO BUTTONS,
At this point in the year I am expecting more not the same...
Final Grade-70%
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JC
12/15/2014 11:43:18 am
PLACES PROJECT
Nothing listed on this site for this project.
GRADE-NTI
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Jeffrey T Cargill
1/20/2015 06:11:23 am
3 R's for CIVIL WAR PROJECT
Nice Job. Please take out ALL of template material next time.
List References on the Proposal as well.
SCORE 95
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JC
3/9/2015 01:33:21 pm
GOVERNMENT PROJECT- 70
Proposal Form- Missing your 3R's -15
Research paper- Good job.
3 multimedia presentations-
Your instagram was OK would have preferred a working link.-0
Video- OK but needed more substance in order to capture your audience. -5
Missing 3rd piece- 10
Nice letter to state rep!
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